I really like the ending and how it presents visually too. I struggle with insomnia so I completely relate to that holding 'sleep hostage'. Cool write all around.
I like the elegant way you have constructed this. Wishing your dream to be your reality could be achieved by a creative thinker like yourself. Create your own world...much nicer:)
nice...if you are stuck without sleep might as well dream...and in waking or just getting up create it....it is a canvas on which we paint....
Very cool piece of writing.Pamela