Captive

Dreamscape 69 
Dreamscape No. 69 by June Rollins
(c) 2013 abruvanamedsly


Dverse Poets

4 comments:

  1. I really like the ending and how it presents visually too. I struggle with insomnia so I completely relate to that holding 'sleep hostage'. Cool write all around.

    ReplyDelete

  2. I like the elegant way you have constructed this. Wishing your dream to be your reality could be achieved by a creative thinker like yourself. Create your own world...much nicer:)

    ReplyDelete

  3. nice...if you are stuck without sleep might as well dream...and in waking or just getting up create it....it is a canvas on which we paint....

    ReplyDelete

Subscribe to: Post Comments (Atom)
COPYRIGHT © 2013 ABRUVANAMEDSLY. ALL RIGHTS RESERVED.